Sunday, March 23, 2014

Review of TWIN CURSE by Rinelle Grey

This is LONG overdue.  Many apologies to Rinelle.

I had another fantastic opportunity to read another ARC by Rinelle Grey before its release.  I finished this one in a timely manner but have been late in getting this review out because I've been out of town over the holidays and after that, I've had many RL, personal issues.  But here it is, my review of Twin Curse!  You can purchase the ebook from Amazon here.

Born together, wed together… 

The ancient law is a curse to Brianna, whose twin sister has fallen in love with a man Brianna can’t bring herself to marry. To avoid disappointing her family, she fakes her death and escapes Eryvale to hide in the dazzling city of Bymere…but the city doesn’t live up to its promise. 

Lonely and homesick, Brianna regrets her decision until she meets Lyall, a handsome mage. Their instant bond grows deeper, and despite knowing she can never marry him, Brianna accepts Lyall’s offer to leave Bymere before travellers from her village discover she’s still alive. Journeying to the exciting Isla de Magi, Brianna makes plans for a new life and is shocked to find she possesses mage magic as well. 

However, when a chilling dream warns of an impending threat to her village, Brianna must leave the Isle and rush home to help her sister. Soon Lyall follows, chasing after the same threat and longing to reunite with Brianna. But can the two work together to stop the danger? Or will Brianna be forced to choose between her love for Lyall and the safety and happiness of her sister?

Please note that I received the novel free of charge for my honest review for the author.

Rinelle paints a beautiful setting for her fantasy world, in which magic is feared and birth twins are shackled by a ridiculous and unforgiving law.

Being a twin myself, the story understandably drew me in from the beginning.  The portrayals of the twins--Mianna and Brianna--are very realistic, as they both share similar qualities while have distinct, and often contrasting personalities.  They butt heads, while ultimately remaining as a team.

My favorite character would have to be Lyall.  He has a strong sense of duty and initially investigates Brianna because he senses her powers.  When it becomes clear that she is oblivious of her own abilities, he watches over her, in a protective manner, which leads to a budding relationship.  I am impressed (yet often disappointed as an anticipating reader) by Brianna's resolve to resist pursuing the romantic pull she obviously feels, remaining loyal for her sister's benefit.  Ultimately, she chooses to join Lyall on the Isle de Magi to attempt to stake out a fulfilling life for herself as a mage.  But her devotion to her sister wins out and she abandons love and happiness to ensure Mianna's and Eryvale's safety.

Time passes and Lyall hardens as a person, and understandably so.  His change is realistic, but he is not the only one that changes.  Brianna remains strong as ever, but her will to put her own desires aside for the good of her family win out, as Lyall finds out when they reunite under tenuous circumstances.

The magic in this world is a misunderstood art, yet it paves the way for the story's ultimatum--highlighting the strength (and magic) of love, both romantic and familial.  Ultimately that is Rinelle Grey's brilliance in this story, love conquers all.  Love for a partner, love for family and children.  The underlying devotion and self-sacrifice remains the same, even in the story's villains--the rampaging trolls bent on total destruction.

It is a quick read once started that satisfies at the end.  I highly recommend it to any and everyone.

Sunday, March 9, 2014

Unphotogenic Cats

Posted from my personal Facebook page:

"Cleo and I are excited to show off this single printed copy of Archer of the Lake (the book I wrote, by the way). We are super tickled, in case you couldn't tell from my frustrated expression. Because my cat is THE LEAST photogenic person in the world. Fifty snaps later and this was the best result.

 Anywho, this is the only physical copy in existence. And it's all mine. Honestly, it's not ready for release, for those that keep asking me. It's still in the Editing Process in The Hands of Mine Editors. I did a quick job of formatting for the paperback version and printed off one copy for myself (which equals to around $10, without author revenue. I'm not sure but I THINK it will be cheaper on Amazon, once I officially release it for purchase).

 It's riddled with typos and other errors that I am slowly marking off with sticky-notes. But after working on it for about two years now, I decided it was time to spoil myself and get me a physical, tangible THING to show myself how much it is worth it.

 So I'll be carrying this around on my person, if anyone who passes by me wants a glimpse.

 The official release date is set for May.
-krm"

Wednesday, March 5, 2014

News, news!

Amidst personal crisis-es, I bring glad tidings!

For the rewrite of Archer of the Lake is complete!

This round, the draft ended up being around 93k words (the original was around 98k words), so while I feel like I've added things, the draft ended up being nearly five thousand words shorter.  So, what's next?

I sent the draft to all my *official* editors (plus another one that my friend wants me to try). For those that beta read the original, I'm sorry but this time you will have to wait for the release to read it again.  And it is different enough, I believe, (in a good way) to compel the original readers to purchase a copy when it is released.  So incentive, eh?

Speaking of which, the new expected release date is May 2014.

Once I receive revisions from my editors, I will apply edits where necessary and then begin formatting for ebook.  Release for Kindle, then later Barnes & Noble, Smashwords, iBooks.  Then cue formatting for the paperback version.

And actually, if you are curious enough, I did some rough formatting for paperback yesterday.  Because, it's been two years and I feel like I need a physical copy to quell my anxieties about this.  I need it in my hands.  So even though it is unedited, I'm printing a personal copy (with a very crappy cover, I might add), and I'm going to review that and enjoy in a physical copy of my work.  If you were wondering, the book with glossary ends to be slightly over 300 pages.  I am excited.

I took some screenshots of the formatting work I did in Microsoft.  Here is what 300+ pages of a novel looks like Microsoft Word:

Click this link to my Facebook post.

We are close.  But what now? What project is there to do now?

If you don't know, I've done some previous work with Runewell (as suggested by the above tab).  I scrapped my old work and started new.  I've also started working on Archer's sequel, now titled The Prince of Kanetalm.  The prologue is finished, and the first chapter is close to being completed.

Meanwhile, I am looking at going off to college this fall to complete my degree.  I both dread and look forward to it.  I know not what the future holds for me, but I do know I am not done writing books. Not by any means.  But college will definitely put a damper on progress. My very slow progress...

But Book One is finished.  So there is that at least!

Thank you, everyone.