With the holidays upon us, I have knocked down the price of Archer of the Lake from $2.99 to $0.99!
And also! I wasn't aware of this, but Archer is available from Barnes & Noble on paperback for $9.12 (which is ten cents cheaper than the Amazon listed price). And also, noticing that I was no longer enrolled in the KDP Select program, I went ahead and began publishing Archer for Nook eBook! I will post the link once it is ready!
Monday, December 22, 2014
Monday, December 1, 2014
Popping In
Hello all! I've been rather quiet on this end of things as of late. I don't have much to report other than I've been working busily away on Prince. I have just started a would-be Chapter 15 (out of a prospective 20 - 22 chapters) and I am at around 70,000 words! I was hoping to have it completed it by the end of the year, and while I am not sure if I will reach that deadline, I shouldn't miss it by much!
Meanwhile I have been otherwise occupying my time preparing for the end of the school semester, catching up on The Walking Dead, purchasing more books to read (and will probably sit, unread, on my book shelf), and facing the holidays.
I also purchased a new laptop (and I have Microsoft Office on it!) so I hoping that with my new equipment, I can more easily progress through writing. Erstwhile, I am grappling with major life decisions involving career choices and schooling and the like.
But I shall keep on, writing!
Meanwhile I have been otherwise occupying my time preparing for the end of the school semester, catching up on The Walking Dead, purchasing more books to read (and will probably sit, unread, on my book shelf), and facing the holidays.
I also purchased a new laptop (and I have Microsoft Office on it!) so I hoping that with my new equipment, I can more easily progress through writing. Erstwhile, I am grappling with major life decisions involving career choices and schooling and the like.
But I shall keep on, writing!
Wednesday, September 3, 2014
Features
I forgot to mention when Archer was reviewed by Rosie Amber and subsequently my interview.
So here are the links:
Rosie's Review of Archer of the Lake
My Interview with Rosie
In other news, during the free promotion of Archer, lasting until September 5th, my books was also featured recently on FreeEbooksDaily.com. Here is the link to Archer's post.
You can also read more details on Archer of the Lake by checking out my interview here!
Thank you everyone for your support!
-krm
So here are the links:
Rosie's Review of Archer of the Lake
My Interview with Rosie
In other news, during the free promotion of Archer, lasting until September 5th, my books was also featured recently on FreeEbooksDaily.com. Here is the link to Archer's post.
You can also read more details on Archer of the Lake by checking out my interview here!
Thank you everyone for your support!
-krm
Thursday, August 28, 2014
Free Promotion
Hey, everyone! With school on the rise and textbook costs rising, money becomes awful scarce, ultimately limiting your funds to purchase books you would read for enjoyment.
Well, I'm just popping in to let you know that "Archer of the Lake" will be FREE for Amazon Kindle from September 1st - September 5th! Mark your calendars! And don't forget, this deal will only last for five days!
You don't need a Kindle o eReader device to read it, either! If you have a smart phone, you can download the Kindle app for FREE and read "Archer of the Lake" and other great books that way! And if you don't have a smart phone, you can just open up the book to read on your computer! It's so simple, so why would you say "no" to a FREE BOOK?
You wouldn't, that's why.
More updates to follow. "Prince" is about halfway through! ;-)
Well, I'm just popping in to let you know that "Archer of the Lake" will be FREE for Amazon Kindle from September 1st - September 5th! Mark your calendars! And don't forget, this deal will only last for five days!
You don't need a Kindle o eReader device to read it, either! If you have a smart phone, you can download the Kindle app for FREE and read "Archer of the Lake" and other great books that way! And if you don't have a smart phone, you can just open up the book to read on your computer! It's so simple, so why would you say "no" to a FREE BOOK?
You wouldn't, that's why.
More updates to follow. "Prince" is about halfway through! ;-)
Wednesday, July 2, 2014
Many Words
I've made a word cloud for Archer! (If you're not familiar with word clouds, the larger the word, the more often it is used!)
In Other News...
The paperback for Archer is available for purchase for under $10! (Normal list price is $10.99!)
Click the link, buy and read! And don't forget to review it!
Also! I've opened up a store on Etsy called Little Owl's Book Shop! There's not much to show right now, but be on the watch for various eReader editions and signed paperbacks of my books! I've included a small blurb on the side bar of this blog for the store! Check it out!
And that's about it for any new news. The sequel is coming along steadily, and I'm entertaining nebulous thoughts of hosting an anthology.
In Other News...
The paperback for Archer is available for purchase for under $10! (Normal list price is $10.99!)
Click the link, buy and read! And don't forget to review it!
Also! I've opened up a store on Etsy called Little Owl's Book Shop! There's not much to show right now, but be on the watch for various eReader editions and signed paperbacks of my books! I've included a small blurb on the side bar of this blog for the store! Check it out!
And that's about it for any new news. The sequel is coming along steadily, and I'm entertaining nebulous thoughts of hosting an anthology.
Wednesday, June 25, 2014
To Inspire
I work in a deli, and it involves a lot of nasty, deplorable work. The corporation alone (which shall remain nameless) can suck the living soul from your walking cadaver. My particular department makes the day even more maddening. Food service, customer service, and retail wrapped into a nice, miserable package.
The other night, I waited on a customer. It was an older gentleman who frequents the deli at least once a week, if not more. I recognized his face from previous encounters and had no grievances with him. This particular encounter, I was unabashedly agitated with the manner he used to get my attention (clucking one's tongue is not an acceptable way to announce your presence, for future reference).
But me and my spirit, which has not been entirely worn down for inexplicable reasons, forced that cheek-aching smile as I patiently took his rather gruff order. The transaction was made and the foodstuff was handed over.
Then the man shifted his weight to his other foot. Another customer, a woman had wandered in line behind him. But no, apparently my previous tardiness would not go unpunished. This man had something on his mind and he was going to share it with me, solicited or no.
He started, "You know I used to work back *there*, about ten years ago now."
I nodded with polite interest, unsure if he meant my department specifically or if he meant the store in general.
He continued, "Yep. Then I had foot surgery and my doctor told me I couldn't be on my feet all day. Then [Store Manager's Name] told me that they didn't have jobs available for someone to sit around all day. So I left. Quit. That was ten years ago. I've written eight books since then, six of which are published. You can buy them on Amazon and other stores."
This actually surprised me. I was excited. HERE was a fellow author in my small, rural community. What a miraculous godsend for me to receive this anecdotal lecture. Of all the people in the store, this man has shared his story with a fellow writer. And, not just any author, from the sound of it. If I'm not wrong, I believe this was a self-published author, judging from context clues.
A genuine smile came to my face while I pointed to myself. "I wrote a book too and I published it on Amazon about a month ago as well!" I informed him excitedly.
There was a perceptible change in his behavior and countenance, and not for the better I'm afraid. There was a definable moment when this man's bravado had completely vanished. He might have even physically stumbled back, eyes widening at me. Clearly he had not expected my response. Somehow my answer wounded his pride.
He quickly composed himself, regaining his self control, and proceeded as if I had not said a single word to him. "Yes well, I have published six books after leaving here ten years ago. Best damn decision in my whole life."
And with that, his story over, this man quite literally turned on his heel and marched off. I was left stung. This man, who was allowed to gloat of his accomplishments to me, could not even share in the joy of a fellow writer. He could only gloss over my accomplishments as he validated and appraised his own.
I reflected on the encounter some time after he had left, that night when I was lying in bed. The next morning, and even until now. Ignoring his manner completely, I can be genuinely happy at the success of another writer. I am. He did not detail to me of his sales and revenue, if he even made enough to earn a substantial living. His concern primarily rested in the number of works he had completed. I can respect that.
And I can draw from his experience as inspiration to my own. Some ten years ago, this man worked in the same or similar conditions as I do now. He made an effort to do something that makes him happy and he succeeded, unshackling himself from a societal structure that can only ensure depression and discontent. And it was the "best damn decision" in his entire life.
Perhaps this is a sign for me. Perhaps there is indeed hope for me. And how I would love to quit every educational and vocational responsibility I am currently obligated to complete and attend right now to write full time. Oh the books I could write and the happiness I could achieve.
But since I have only sold 24 books in a 32 day period, some would still insist that this was folly.
Perhaps, some day.
-krm
The other night, I waited on a customer. It was an older gentleman who frequents the deli at least once a week, if not more. I recognized his face from previous encounters and had no grievances with him. This particular encounter, I was unabashedly agitated with the manner he used to get my attention (clucking one's tongue is not an acceptable way to announce your presence, for future reference).
But me and my spirit, which has not been entirely worn down for inexplicable reasons, forced that cheek-aching smile as I patiently took his rather gruff order. The transaction was made and the foodstuff was handed over.
Then the man shifted his weight to his other foot. Another customer, a woman had wandered in line behind him. But no, apparently my previous tardiness would not go unpunished. This man had something on his mind and he was going to share it with me, solicited or no.
He started, "You know I used to work back *there*, about ten years ago now."
I nodded with polite interest, unsure if he meant my department specifically or if he meant the store in general.
He continued, "Yep. Then I had foot surgery and my doctor told me I couldn't be on my feet all day. Then [Store Manager's Name] told me that they didn't have jobs available for someone to sit around all day. So I left. Quit. That was ten years ago. I've written eight books since then, six of which are published. You can buy them on Amazon and other stores."
This actually surprised me. I was excited. HERE was a fellow author in my small, rural community. What a miraculous godsend for me to receive this anecdotal lecture. Of all the people in the store, this man has shared his story with a fellow writer. And, not just any author, from the sound of it. If I'm not wrong, I believe this was a self-published author, judging from context clues.
A genuine smile came to my face while I pointed to myself. "I wrote a book too and I published it on Amazon about a month ago as well!" I informed him excitedly.
There was a perceptible change in his behavior and countenance, and not for the better I'm afraid. There was a definable moment when this man's bravado had completely vanished. He might have even physically stumbled back, eyes widening at me. Clearly he had not expected my response. Somehow my answer wounded his pride.
He quickly composed himself, regaining his self control, and proceeded as if I had not said a single word to him. "Yes well, I have published six books after leaving here ten years ago. Best damn decision in my whole life."
And with that, his story over, this man quite literally turned on his heel and marched off. I was left stung. This man, who was allowed to gloat of his accomplishments to me, could not even share in the joy of a fellow writer. He could only gloss over my accomplishments as he validated and appraised his own.
I reflected on the encounter some time after he had left, that night when I was lying in bed. The next morning, and even until now. Ignoring his manner completely, I can be genuinely happy at the success of another writer. I am. He did not detail to me of his sales and revenue, if he even made enough to earn a substantial living. His concern primarily rested in the number of works he had completed. I can respect that.
And I can draw from his experience as inspiration to my own. Some ten years ago, this man worked in the same or similar conditions as I do now. He made an effort to do something that makes him happy and he succeeded, unshackling himself from a societal structure that can only ensure depression and discontent. And it was the "best damn decision" in his entire life.
Perhaps this is a sign for me. Perhaps there is indeed hope for me. And how I would love to quit every educational and vocational responsibility I am currently obligated to complete and attend right now to write full time. Oh the books I could write and the happiness I could achieve.
But since I have only sold 24 books in a 32 day period, some would still insist that this was folly.
Perhaps, some day.
-krm
Tuesday, June 24, 2014
A Month Later
I've intended to make a fully concerted effort to blog more, considering I've just released a book. Actually today marks the first month that Archer's been released. If I'm being honest, I've tried waiting until I have more information to blog about. So far, I don't have much. I need to try to do some promotional things.
The paperback still isn't available. I'm sorry to everyone who's been waiting for it and I'm grateful for your patience thus far. I've been having problems with the proofing--not the actual proofing process. I've just been discovering problems with my file once it's been through file review. Specifically, I'm having issues with the drop-cap for the beginning of each chapter. But I'm hoping to have these problems resolved soon, and then the paperback shall be ready.
In other, good news: Within the month of its release, I have sold 24 copies of Archer for Kindle (plus 1 borrowed unit for an Amazon prime member). Two of these books were sold to people in the UK and another one to someone in Canada. And with that, I've claimed proper bragging rights, boasting about how I'm now an "international" author.
I have two 5-star reviews on my book's Amazon page, plus one 4-star review. For it's first month, I certainly do not think these are bad stats. I'm excited and alternating between work on the sequel and prepping the paperback. The sequel, tentatively titled "Prince of the West", is about a quarter of the way finished. 23,000+ words out of an estimated 100,000 words.
I'm scheduled for a book review and author interview over at Rosie Amber's blog starting July 7th, so be sure to watch out for me there!
The local newspaper did a feature on me and my book, it details some minimal biographical information. Click here to check that out.
Meanwhile, I have very many future books racking my brain. I've been catching up on my reading after feverishly writing for two and a half years. I read The Fault in Our Stars and watched its movie. I'm catching up on Game of Thrones. I've done little to rein in my book-hoarding habit and have purchased a conservative estimate of twenty books within the last month. Currently I'm reading through a nonfiction book about pirates, which may or may not allude to a future sequel of Archer.
And on the off-chance I haven't bored or annoyed you yet, you should totally check out my book, available for purchase on Kindle. (Side Note: I'm not sure if I'm going to take part in KDP Select on the next book go-around)
And, that's about it! Hopefully soon I will have more to discuss!
-krm
The paperback still isn't available. I'm sorry to everyone who's been waiting for it and I'm grateful for your patience thus far. I've been having problems with the proofing--not the actual proofing process. I've just been discovering problems with my file once it's been through file review. Specifically, I'm having issues with the drop-cap for the beginning of each chapter. But I'm hoping to have these problems resolved soon, and then the paperback shall be ready.
In other, good news: Within the month of its release, I have sold 24 copies of Archer for Kindle (plus 1 borrowed unit for an Amazon prime member). Two of these books were sold to people in the UK and another one to someone in Canada. And with that, I've claimed proper bragging rights, boasting about how I'm now an "international" author.
I have two 5-star reviews on my book's Amazon page, plus one 4-star review. For it's first month, I certainly do not think these are bad stats. I'm excited and alternating between work on the sequel and prepping the paperback. The sequel, tentatively titled "Prince of the West", is about a quarter of the way finished. 23,000+ words out of an estimated 100,000 words.
I'm scheduled for a book review and author interview over at Rosie Amber's blog starting July 7th, so be sure to watch out for me there!
The local newspaper did a feature on me and my book, it details some minimal biographical information. Click here to check that out.
Meanwhile, I have very many future books racking my brain. I've been catching up on my reading after feverishly writing for two and a half years. I read The Fault in Our Stars and watched its movie. I'm catching up on Game of Thrones. I've done little to rein in my book-hoarding habit and have purchased a conservative estimate of twenty books within the last month. Currently I'm reading through a nonfiction book about pirates, which may or may not allude to a future sequel of Archer.
And on the off-chance I haven't bored or annoyed you yet, you should totally check out my book, available for purchase on Kindle. (Side Note: I'm not sure if I'm going to take part in KDP Select on the next book go-around)
And, that's about it! Hopefully soon I will have more to discuss!
-krm
Saturday, May 24, 2014
Two and a Half Years
Two and a Half Years.
That's how long it has taken me to write, edit, rewrite, re-edit, and publish this book. But it's finally out there. It's finally available for purchase. And it is finally being read by paying customers.
I am happy to announce that Archer of the Lake is -finally- available for Kindle.
I've also contacted my cover artist for the paperback now that I have an accurate page count. The interior is ready, and soon the paperback will be available for purchase. I'll post links to that once it's ready.
But for now, why don't you hop on over and buy my book? I am confident it will not disappoint. I am confident that it is pretty damn good now.
Also, once you finish reading, why not leave a review on Amazon? And while you are at it, leave a review at Goodreads, too!
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That's how long it has taken me to write, edit, rewrite, re-edit, and publish this book. But it's finally out there. It's finally available for purchase. And it is finally being read by paying customers.
I am happy to announce that Archer of the Lake is -finally- available for Kindle.
I've also contacted my cover artist for the paperback now that I have an accurate page count. The interior is ready, and soon the paperback will be available for purchase. I'll post links to that once it's ready.
But for now, why don't you hop on over and buy my book? I am confident it will not disappoint. I am confident that it is pretty damn good now.
Also, once you finish reading, why not leave a review on Amazon? And while you are at it, leave a review at Goodreads, too!
Thursday, May 22, 2014
We're Close
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| A preview on Kindle |
I've taken initial steps to format the ebook (which I've never done before - yikes!). I'm still hoping for that May release. In the meantime, if there are any fellow indie authors or book bloggers that would like to read Archer of the Lake for free (and in return I would ask for a review), just let me know!
Sit tight, folks.
-krm
Sunday, March 23, 2014
Review of TWIN CURSE by Rinelle Grey
This is LONG overdue. Many apologies to Rinelle.
I had another fantastic opportunity to read another ARC by Rinelle Grey before its release. I finished this one in a timely manner but have been late in getting this review out because I've been out of town over the holidays and after that, I've had many RL, personal issues. But here it is, my review of Twin Curse! You can purchase the ebook from Amazon here.
Born together, wed together…
The ancient law is a curse to Brianna, whose twin sister has fallen in love with a man Brianna can’t bring herself to marry. To avoid disappointing her family, she fakes her death and escapes Eryvale to hide in the dazzling city of Bymere…but the city doesn’t live up to its promise.
Lonely and homesick, Brianna regrets her decision until she meets Lyall, a handsome mage. Their instant bond grows deeper, and despite knowing she can never marry him, Brianna accepts Lyall’s offer to leave Bymere before travellers from her village discover she’s still alive. Journeying to the exciting Isla de Magi, Brianna makes plans for a new life and is shocked to find she possesses mage magic as well.
However, when a chilling dream warns of an impending threat to her village, Brianna must leave the Isle and rush home to help her sister. Soon Lyall follows, chasing after the same threat and longing to reunite with Brianna. But can the two work together to stop the danger? Or will Brianna be forced to choose between her love for Lyall and the safety and happiness of her sister?
Please note that I received the novel free of charge for my honest review for the author.
Rinelle paints a beautiful setting for her fantasy world, in which magic is feared and birth twins are shackled by a ridiculous and unforgiving law.
Being a twin myself, the story understandably drew me in from the beginning. The portrayals of the twins--Mianna and Brianna--are very realistic, as they both share similar qualities while have distinct, and often contrasting personalities. They butt heads, while ultimately remaining as a team.
My favorite character would have to be Lyall. He has a strong sense of duty and initially investigates Brianna because he senses her powers. When it becomes clear that she is oblivious of her own abilities, he watches over her, in a protective manner, which leads to a budding relationship. I am impressed (yet often disappointed as an anticipating reader) by Brianna's resolve to resist pursuing the romantic pull she obviously feels, remaining loyal for her sister's benefit. Ultimately, she chooses to join Lyall on the Isle de Magi to attempt to stake out a fulfilling life for herself as a mage. But her devotion to her sister wins out and she abandons love and happiness to ensure Mianna's and Eryvale's safety.
Time passes and Lyall hardens as a person, and understandably so. His change is realistic, but he is not the only one that changes. Brianna remains strong as ever, but her will to put her own desires aside for the good of her family win out, as Lyall finds out when they reunite under tenuous circumstances.
The magic in this world is a misunderstood art, yet it paves the way for the story's ultimatum--highlighting the strength (and magic) of love, both romantic and familial. Ultimately that is Rinelle Grey's brilliance in this story, love conquers all. Love for a partner, love for family and children. The underlying devotion and self-sacrifice remains the same, even in the story's villains--the rampaging trolls bent on total destruction.
It is a quick read once started that satisfies at the end. I highly recommend it to any and everyone.
I had another fantastic opportunity to read another ARC by Rinelle Grey before its release. I finished this one in a timely manner but have been late in getting this review out because I've been out of town over the holidays and after that, I've had many RL, personal issues. But here it is, my review of Twin Curse! You can purchase the ebook from Amazon here.
The ancient law is a curse to Brianna, whose twin sister has fallen in love with a man Brianna can’t bring herself to marry. To avoid disappointing her family, she fakes her death and escapes Eryvale to hide in the dazzling city of Bymere…but the city doesn’t live up to its promise.
Lonely and homesick, Brianna regrets her decision until she meets Lyall, a handsome mage. Their instant bond grows deeper, and despite knowing she can never marry him, Brianna accepts Lyall’s offer to leave Bymere before travellers from her village discover she’s still alive. Journeying to the exciting Isla de Magi, Brianna makes plans for a new life and is shocked to find she possesses mage magic as well.
However, when a chilling dream warns of an impending threat to her village, Brianna must leave the Isle and rush home to help her sister. Soon Lyall follows, chasing after the same threat and longing to reunite with Brianna. But can the two work together to stop the danger? Or will Brianna be forced to choose between her love for Lyall and the safety and happiness of her sister?
Please note that I received the novel free of charge for my honest review for the author.
Rinelle paints a beautiful setting for her fantasy world, in which magic is feared and birth twins are shackled by a ridiculous and unforgiving law.
Being a twin myself, the story understandably drew me in from the beginning. The portrayals of the twins--Mianna and Brianna--are very realistic, as they both share similar qualities while have distinct, and often contrasting personalities. They butt heads, while ultimately remaining as a team.
My favorite character would have to be Lyall. He has a strong sense of duty and initially investigates Brianna because he senses her powers. When it becomes clear that she is oblivious of her own abilities, he watches over her, in a protective manner, which leads to a budding relationship. I am impressed (yet often disappointed as an anticipating reader) by Brianna's resolve to resist pursuing the romantic pull she obviously feels, remaining loyal for her sister's benefit. Ultimately, she chooses to join Lyall on the Isle de Magi to attempt to stake out a fulfilling life for herself as a mage. But her devotion to her sister wins out and she abandons love and happiness to ensure Mianna's and Eryvale's safety.
Time passes and Lyall hardens as a person, and understandably so. His change is realistic, but he is not the only one that changes. Brianna remains strong as ever, but her will to put her own desires aside for the good of her family win out, as Lyall finds out when they reunite under tenuous circumstances.
The magic in this world is a misunderstood art, yet it paves the way for the story's ultimatum--highlighting the strength (and magic) of love, both romantic and familial. Ultimately that is Rinelle Grey's brilliance in this story, love conquers all. Love for a partner, love for family and children. The underlying devotion and self-sacrifice remains the same, even in the story's villains--the rampaging trolls bent on total destruction.
It is a quick read once started that satisfies at the end. I highly recommend it to any and everyone.
Sunday, March 9, 2014
Unphotogenic Cats
Posted from my personal Facebook page:
"Cleo and I are excited to show off this single printed copy of Archer of the Lake (the book I wrote, by the way). We are super tickled, in case you couldn't tell from my frustrated expression. Because my cat is THE LEAST photogenic person in the world. Fifty snaps later and this was the best result.
Anywho, this is the only physical copy in existence. And it's all mine. Honestly, it's not ready for release, for those that keep asking me. It's still in the Editing Process in The Hands of Mine Editors. I did a quick job of formatting for the paperback version and printed off one copy for myself (which equals to around $10, without author revenue. I'm not sure but I THINK it will be cheaper on Amazon, once I officially release it for purchase).
It's riddled with typos and other errors that I am slowly marking off with sticky-notes. But after working on it for about two years now, I decided it was time to spoil myself and get me a physical, tangible THING to show myself how much it is worth it.
So I'll be carrying this around on my person, if anyone who passes by me wants a glimpse.
The official release date is set for May.
-krm"
Anywho, this is the only physical copy in existence. And it's all mine. Honestly, it's not ready for release, for those that keep asking me. It's still in the Editing Process in The Hands of Mine Editors. I did a quick job of formatting for the paperback version and printed off one copy for myself (which equals to around $10, without author revenue. I'm not sure but I THINK it will be cheaper on Amazon, once I officially release it for purchase).
It's riddled with typos and other errors that I am slowly marking off with sticky-notes. But after working on it for about two years now, I decided it was time to spoil myself and get me a physical, tangible THING to show myself how much it is worth it.
So I'll be carrying this around on my person, if anyone who passes by me wants a glimpse.
The official release date is set for May.
-krm"
Wednesday, March 5, 2014
News, news!
Amidst personal crisis-es, I bring glad tidings!
For the rewrite of Archer of the Lake is complete!
This round, the draft ended up being around 93k words (the original was around 98k words), so while I feel like I've added things, the draft ended up being nearly five thousand words shorter. So, what's next?
I sent the draft to all my *official* editors (plus another one that my friend wants me to try). For those that beta read the original, I'm sorry but this time you will have to wait for the release to read it again. And it is different enough, I believe, (in a good way) to compel the original readers to purchase a copy when it is released. So incentive, eh?
Speaking of which, the new expected release date is May 2014.
Once I receive revisions from my editors, I will apply edits where necessary and then begin formatting for ebook. Release for Kindle, then later Barnes & Noble, Smashwords, iBooks. Then cue formatting for the paperback version.
And actually, if you are curious enough, I did some rough formatting for paperback yesterday. Because, it's been two years and I feel like I need a physical copy to quell my anxieties about this. I need it in my hands. So even though it is unedited, I'm printing a personal copy (with a very crappy cover, I might add), and I'm going to review that and enjoy in a physical copy of my work. If you were wondering, the book with glossary ends to be slightly over 300 pages. I am excited.
I took some screenshots of the formatting work I did in Microsoft. Here is what 300+ pages of a novel looks like Microsoft Word:
Click this link to my Facebook post.
We are close. But what now? What project is there to do now?
If you don't know, I've done some previous work with Runewell (as suggested by the above tab). I scrapped my old work and started new. I've also started working on Archer's sequel, now titled The Prince of Kanetalm. The prologue is finished, and the first chapter is close to being completed.
Meanwhile, I am looking at going off to college this fall to complete my degree. I both dread and look forward to it. I know not what the future holds for me, but I do know I am not done writing books. Not by any means. But college will definitely put a damper on progress. My very slow progress...
But Book One is finished. So there is that at least!
Thank you, everyone.
For the rewrite of Archer of the Lake is complete!
This round, the draft ended up being around 93k words (the original was around 98k words), so while I feel like I've added things, the draft ended up being nearly five thousand words shorter. So, what's next?
I sent the draft to all my *official* editors (plus another one that my friend wants me to try). For those that beta read the original, I'm sorry but this time you will have to wait for the release to read it again. And it is different enough, I believe, (in a good way) to compel the original readers to purchase a copy when it is released. So incentive, eh?
Speaking of which, the new expected release date is May 2014.
Once I receive revisions from my editors, I will apply edits where necessary and then begin formatting for ebook. Release for Kindle, then later Barnes & Noble, Smashwords, iBooks. Then cue formatting for the paperback version.
And actually, if you are curious enough, I did some rough formatting for paperback yesterday. Because, it's been two years and I feel like I need a physical copy to quell my anxieties about this. I need it in my hands. So even though it is unedited, I'm printing a personal copy (with a very crappy cover, I might add), and I'm going to review that and enjoy in a physical copy of my work. If you were wondering, the book with glossary ends to be slightly over 300 pages. I am excited.
I took some screenshots of the formatting work I did in Microsoft. Here is what 300+ pages of a novel looks like Microsoft Word:
Click this link to my Facebook post.
We are close. But what now? What project is there to do now?
If you don't know, I've done some previous work with Runewell (as suggested by the above tab). I scrapped my old work and started new. I've also started working on Archer's sequel, now titled The Prince of Kanetalm. The prologue is finished, and the first chapter is close to being completed.
Meanwhile, I am looking at going off to college this fall to complete my degree. I both dread and look forward to it. I know not what the future holds for me, but I do know I am not done writing books. Not by any means. But college will definitely put a damper on progress. My very slow progress...
But Book One is finished. So there is that at least!
Thank you, everyone.
Tuesday, February 11, 2014
What's Happening
Hello! I haven't updated in a while, and I don't suspect that this will be a long post. I'm just giving a quick update on what's what.
The writing workshop I attempted...I dropped it. I know, I can never finish anything.
BUT
Progress is being made on Archer. I'm over 50k words. Chapter 11 out of 17 (because I have chapters now and even added two extra chapters while writing). A friend and I have gone back over the beginning and we're doing some major revisions on this rewrite.
So whenever I do finish this, it better be damn near perfect.
In other news, I owe a review post for Rinelle Grey's Twin Curse, and I feel especially guilty after reading how unsuccessful its sales were going from one of her more recent blog posts.
But that's that. I'm supposed to be an indie author. I need to have a book out, and that has taken priority.
Thank you for your patience.
The writing workshop I attempted...I dropped it. I know, I can never finish anything.
BUT
Progress is being made on Archer. I'm over 50k words. Chapter 11 out of 17 (because I have chapters now and even added two extra chapters while writing). A friend and I have gone back over the beginning and we're doing some major revisions on this rewrite.
So whenever I do finish this, it better be damn near perfect.
In other news, I owe a review post for Rinelle Grey's Twin Curse, and I feel especially guilty after reading how unsuccessful its sales were going from one of her more recent blog posts.
But that's that. I'm supposed to be an indie author. I need to have a book out, and that has taken priority.
Thank you for your patience.
Thursday, January 9, 2014
[WW] 1 - Outlining
THE PLANNING PROCESS
January 1 - 15
January 1 - 15
Section Three: Outlining
Runewell:
Email for copy.
In the writing community, writers typically identify with one of two groups:
Planners OR Pantsers
Planner are those who plan, to some extent, the structure of their story or project. Pantsers, as hinted by their name, prefer to plan as they write, fling by the seat of the pants. They may feel too impatient to sit down and draft an outline or they may feel as though it's necessary. Many beginning writers start writing feeling this way. As time goes on, they may change to be planners. I was this way. I decided to be a pantser, but quickly changed my ways.
Whether you're a planner or a pantser, an effective outline can go a long way to finishing your story. (Honestly, don't knock an outline until you try it!)
As mentioned before, I can only show you methods that I know, ones that work for me, so while I explain my outlining process, please know that you are not restricted to this format. However, I would like to see some form of outline from my participants, even an incomplete one.
The first thing to know about my outlines is that they are usually, always unfinished. Even when they story is completed. You may wish to rewrite it or add notes for a sequel. My outlines tend to be several pages long and I'll include scans of them at the bottom of this post.
I feel more comfortable before I start working on a new book if I at least have some sort of working outline prepared. When drafting your outline, you'll want to first make notes of all the major events that will occur in your story. A list of a chronological timeline. Or, if you prefer something more structured you can consider these divisions (which may also help develop your story):
1. Exposition
2. Rising Action
3. Climax
4. Falling Action
OR
- Introduce main character(s)
- Introduce problem/antagonist
- Search to solve problem
- Journey
- Other help
- Introduce secondary problem
- Solve secondary problem
- Prepare for conflict/climax
- Conflict/Climax
- End
You don't have to follow these outline examples exactly. My outlines simply list all major events (which is really what those are without the specific headings).
The other things you want to include in your outlines are notes. Include notes on characters (their family, personality), geographical annotations (maybe even sketch maps or blue prints), research notes, dialogue even. I know that I have a habit of imagining conversations between my characters, and I can use that for my book. Write everything you can think of or remember for your outline.
There's a reason for this. Some people will say that the purpose of an outline is to keep you organized. While this is true, I use my outline primarily for a different reason. So I don't forget. I've had more than enough times where I think of brilliant material and completely forget it later when I try to remember. A good rule of thumb is that, if you think it up, write it down.
Another helpful hint I've learned from other writers--
I, like most people, usually write by hand. (If you type everything, including your outline, then this will not apply to you). Write down your outline by hand like normal and then scan copies of it to your computer. That way, you will have a digital copy of your outline, should anything happy to your hard copy.
My outlines:
(please respect my work and do not copy or redistribute it without my consent)
I couldn't find the original outline for Archer, but here are the outlines to other projects. Please note, SPOILERS.
Eastmoon (Archer's sequel):
Email for copy.
Eastmoon (Archer's sequel):
Email for copy.
Runewell:
Email for copy.
Sunday, January 5, 2014
[WW] 1 - Antagonist
THE PLANNING PROCESS
January 1 - 15
Section Two: Antagonist
Your next important step in planning your story is to decide your antagonist.
In forming your protagonist's problem and consequently the plot drive, your antagonist becomes a critical player in your plot. When you build you antagonist, it is important to keep in mind that they need to be initially more powerful than your protagonist. Your antagonist presents the problem to your protagonist, and in order for the problem to exist, the protagonist must be unable to overcome this problem in the beginning.
So thus is the base creation of your story. In order to defeat the antagonist, the protagonist must learn or discover the capability to conquer the antagonist. If you feel that your story does not fit such parameters, consider all sorts of antagonists. The antagonist may be one particular villain. The antagonist may be an abstract or nonlinear source: an evil power or an internal flaw of your protagonist. Your antagonist may be a force of nature, religion, government or other group of organizational means.
Develop your antagonist. If it is a character, give them motivation and a personality. Why are they antagonist? Why are they, specifically, the opposing force to your protagonist? To make him realistic, give him or her a childhood, parents, family. A backstory. But, perhaps the most important for this type of antagonist is they need a quality or characteristic that mirrors or contrasts your protagonist.
In my first book, the central antagonist may not be immediately clear. There are two swirling conflicts within Archer of the Lake, which is fine if you adequately devote time to each.
The antagonist to the first conflict would be an upset of governmental power, where the governing force exercises its abilities for a certain agenda. The agenda ultimately belongs to a particular character, but I have chosen not to reveal the character's identity for the sake of expanding the series. (So note, it is important to consider that when writing a series of books, you must stretch a conflict and not immediately resolve it at the first book's end. The antagonist must be logically present throughout all or the remaining books that will have this problem.)
In Archer of the Lake, my protagonist Caelfel maintains a stubborn sense of morality, which is a defining point to her character. She lacks, however, the cunning and ability to truly search and overcome this mysterious antagonist. Thus the need to make this antagonist appear for the following books.
The second conflict in this book is a run-of-the-mill villainous baddie. When Caelfel is confronted and kidnapped, she has been stripped of all her weaponry and defenses, thus making her unable to defeat this antagonist--a specific villain named Admiral Grimault. By the book's end, she is presented with an opportunity to slay the villain and, possessing the necessary determination and ability, she does, defeating the antagonist.
So, as suggested by the above section, defeating your antagonist does not have to be overly complicated. The complexity comes from your Hero's Journey. But defeating the actual villain may be as simple as silver bullets and the like.
With my second book, Archer of the Lake's sequel, the antagonist is a werewolf named Tarion, leading his pack of ravenous werewolves. They present the major problems of the story. Once Tarion is slain, his antagonistic reign comes to end. But the story won't end there. The good thing about sequels is that you can always bring a baddie from the first book back into the second. Remember what I said earlier?
The overall problem that existed in Archer returns in its sequel.
What sort of antagonists are you planning for your novel? Or, if your project is unconventional, what are you planning to be the opposing force for your protagonist?
Wednesday, January 1, 2014
[WW] 1 - Protagonist & Plot Drive
I've decided to initiate a writing workshop with my writing group "The Drunken Lion." This workshop is designed to help prospective writers complete a novel. The workshop is scheduled to last from January 1st - April 19th. Below is a rough timeline of what I intend to cover during this time.
1. January 1 - 15: Brainstorming, Outlining, "The Planning Process"
2. January 16 - 29: Exposition, Character & Plot Introduction
3. January 30 - February 12: Rising Action & Character Development
4. February 13 - 26: The Journey
5. February 27 - March 12: "The Tough Stuff", Transitions & Boring Details
6. March 13 - 26: The Plot Thickens
7. March 27 - April 9: Falling Action & Ending
8. April 10 - 19: Polishing & Editing
I have decided to share the posts from my writing workshop lessons to my page here. This is the first section on "The Planning Process", which focuses on the Protagonist and Plot Drive.
THE PLANNING PROCESS
January 1 - 15
Section One: Protagonist & Plot Drive
Welcome to my "Write a Novel with Me" Workshop!
We'll do introductions first. My name is Kelly, and I have written a book. For some reason, I feel as though this validates me enough to impart the wisdom of book-writing unto others. My book is not published yet, but I hope it will be soon. For more information on me as an author, you may visit my website ikellymichaels.com!
This is the first day of the section I've titled as "The Planning Process." For the next two weeks, we will be extensively planning our books. Because we have have 14-week workshop, this is an accelerated course. In reality, there is no definite amount of time brainstorming or writing your book will take. But hopefully this workshop will break down and explain the process with you.
Be mindful that I can only show you the way I write books. If you find a different way works for you, then I encourage you to pursue (and even share with everyone) that method!
Let's get started!
In order to have an idea that is able to be fully developed and expanded into the size of
book, you must prepare your protagonist.
I'm not saying you have to flesh out all the physical details or personality traits right now. But your protagonist needs a problem. This problem will be your protagnist's conflict, the drive that pushes the story to its conclusion. Be mindful of that when you develop this.
Your protagonist(s) needs a logical, plausible reason for having said problem. And by your story's end, they will need to have learned/gleaned/gained the means to accomplish said problem. You don't need to envision the FULL JOURNEY now, but you'll need a pretty clean picture of the end, even if the End is the hero(ine) not solving the problem at all and BAM, you have a cliffhanger for your sequel. But there definitely will need to be a problem.
I will use two examples throughout this workshop. One example will be from my completed book and the other will be from its sequel, the book I plan to write with you.
In the completed book, Archer of the Lake, my protagonist is named Caelfel. Her problem, one of the central drives of the story, is her friendship with an outcast. Upon their initial meeting in the beginning, Caelfel's life has been thrown into constant adversity. She faces waves of problems because of this friendship. The driving point is that continuing such a friendship puts her life in danger, as culminated by her kidnapping at the end. Caelfel's personality, her staunch sense of morality and a blooming romance, perpetuate the problem through the story's end. You'll want to make sure that you perpetuate the problem to its fruition too.
But a story can have more than one conflict. To make it complex, the protagonist needs underlying flaws that obstruct the path to their solution. Caelfel faces internal problems too. She grapples with her youth and the image society thrusts upon her, so she often feels a need to prove herself. Some ways through the story, Caelfel loses powers, her ability to perform magic, and then becomes defenseless to protect herself. These are compound problems that enhance your story and protagonist more. Solving them may prove more difficult than your initial problem, but they do develop your character more.
In my sequel, Caelfel ventures away from her homeland and stumbles upon an army from a distant land. The army faces a problem, and Caelfel makes the problem her own. The driving point for this story are the rampant werewolves that terrorize this new kingdom. War and conflict are great, simple ways of creating a driving plot in your story. The secondary, compound problem Caelfel will face in the sequel is adjusting to the lifestyle of men, as she is an elf. The struggle for adaptation can grow a character in maturity, developing them further.
Those are just a few examples. Your story will be different of course. The essential theme here is to recognize that your character needs to achieve a goal.
So share below what sort of problems or protagonists you are creating! If you need some help, share your idea and we can discuss!
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